love the line art.good stuff mate

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You definitely have one of the best Pepper designed helmets. But the body feels static in comparison to the right arm and head. Maybe if the right shoulder was raised would offset it a bit. It needs some kind of weight shift in the body. Aside from that the design of it all is pretty unique.

good head! nice details on it, but need more work with anatomy

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thanks man, i love critique, ill drop by your pepper piece in a sec

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thanks for the comment, can you elaborate more on the anatomy crit?

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thanks man, i love your pepper piece too

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first of all the anatomy of the bird,it's not very good,with all these details on pepper's helmet and outfit the bird looks like something from other pic,but not necessary better.the head is good,the helmet too,but the pose reminds me a little the egyptian drawings,you know ,like head in total profil,body in total face.it's a little static,looks like she's like this with effort,the head can't be in this profil when the body is in this face...gosh i hope i explain it well and then the left arm looks a little to short,compaired to the right.

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thank you for the critique, i agree her post is very rigid, i originally intended to have the bird perching on her hand and her looking sideways at it, after i rendered out the face and body i realised the pose was very unnatural and uncomfortable, since i was pressed for time i tried to fix it by having the bird perching on her shoulder-guard-blade things, and placing her arm more forward, while that did fix the problem with her arm, her face was still too stiff...i would have fixed it, but i ran out of time at the end.

next time ill plan it out better through thumbnails first thanks again for the help!

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ever considered color it?the line art looks really solid now and i like it

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